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Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Investing money to uplift the conditions of citizens is the primary responsibility of the government. However, some people consider that the government must allocate funds to confer facilities to its senior citizens, whereas, others believe government should give priority to the young people of the nation. In my opinion, while elderly reqiure the rudimentary care, it is nevertheless the youngsters who need financial support and encouragement. Spending tax money on old people is essential. They can not earn money for themselves because they are both physically unfit and not mentally healthy. Most importantly, most of the ritires are suffering from chronic diseases such as diabetes, which make their body fragile and weak. For instance, it has been estimated that an average old individuals need 10, 000 rupees per month to pay their bills and for medications. Moreover, some children often abandon their parents as they believe old people are burden on them. Therefore, they have no one to assist them if government devise schemes to facilitate them they will not experience any trouble during the last phase of their life. However, it is imperative to spend money to provide necessary facilities such as books, fees, to young people. This is simply because they are the future of the nation. If they get the quality education, they will become qualified and competent professionals and will certainly bring prosperity to the country. The best example is Sundar pichai, who is CEO of Facebook has revealed that his vast academic knowledge is the secret behind his success. Moreover, businesses will thrive in the future around the globe. Thus, government must support their young inhibitants. Both views put forward valid points, however, i firmly believe that students must get financial assistance. It could be possible if authorities provide them the lastest infrastructure, highly qualified staff and modern technologies. Whereas, grey people need a basic care.
In conclusion, even though elderly need small amount of money to sustain their life but governments should focus on younger as they could be responsible for the better future
Investing money to uplift the conditions of citizens is the primary responsibility of the government. However,
some
people consider that the government
must
allocate funds to confer facilities to its senior citizens, whereas, others believe government should give priority to the young people of the nation. In my opinion, while elderly
reqiure
the rudimentary care, it is
nevertheless
the youngsters who need financial support and encouragement. Spending tax money on old people
is
essential. They can not earn money for themselves
because
they are both
physically
unfit and not mentally healthy. Most
importantly
, most of the
ritires
are suffering from chronic diseases such as diabetes, which
make
their body fragile and weak.
For instance
, it has
been estimated
that an average old
individuals
need 10, 000 rupees per month to pay their bills and for medications.
Moreover
,
some
children
often
abandon their parents as they believe old people are burden on them.
Therefore
, they have no one to assist them if government devise schemes to facilitate them they will not experience any trouble during the last phase of their life. However, it is imperative to spend money to provide necessary facilities such as books, fees, to young people. This is
simply
because
they are the future of the nation. If they
get
the quality education, they will become qualified and competent professionals and will
certainly
bring prosperity to the country. The best example is
Sundar
pichai
, who is CEO of Facebook has revealed that his vast academic knowledge is the secret behind his success.
Moreover
, businesses will thrive in the future around the globe.
Thus
, government
must
support their young
inhibitants
. Both views put forward valid points, however,
i
firmly
believe that students
must
get
financial assistance. It could be possible if authorities provide them the
lastest
infrastructure,
highly
qualified staff and modern technologies.
Whereas
,
grey
people need a basic care.

In conclusion
,
even though
elderly need
small
amount of money to sustain their life
but
governments should focus on younger as they could be responsible for the better future

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