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Rich countries are getting richer while poor countries are getting poorer

The gap between rich and poor countries is widening nowadays. There are quite many articles, as well as scientists who are interested in this issue. In fact, there is a tendency in the world that the richer get richer and the poorer get poorer. But in this case there are quite understandable reasons why this happens. Firstly, due to the long-term development of technology in rich countries they now have well-equipped machines. That helps them mine and manufacture products faster and more efficiently. Moreover, in many developed countries the educational system, helth care and economy are better instituted than in more backward countries. In my opinion, that technological gap is caused by the high level of corruption and the lack of a strong leader in poor countries. There are4e also several ways to narrow the gap between countries. The most comprehensive is, of course, to make sure that the developed countries help the backward countries. However, in my opinion, it is necessary to help not only with money, but with the construction of working enterprises and the training of workers. So there will be a better chance that the money will go in the right direction. To conclude, the difference between rich countries and poor countries actually present and it will require not only action from the side of the poor, but also help of rich countries. I hope that we will see new rich and strong countries on the world stage in the future, despite the fact that this will be quite difficult to achieve.
The gap between rich and poor countries is widening nowadays. There are quite
many
articles,
as well
as scientists who
are interested
in this issue. In fact, there is a tendency in the world that the richer
get
richer and the poorer
get
poorer.
But
in this case
there are quite understandable reasons why this happens.
Firstly
, due to the long-term development of technology in rich countries they
now
have well-equipped machines. That helps them mine and manufacture products faster and more
efficiently
.
Moreover
, in
many
developed countries the educational system,
helth
care and economy are better instituted than in more backward countries. In my opinion, that technological gap
is caused
by the high level of corruption and the lack of a strong leader in poor countries. There are4e
also
several ways to narrow the gap between countries. The most comprehensive is,
of course
, to
make
sure that the developed countries help the backward countries.
However
, in my opinion, it is necessary to help not
only
with money,
but
with the construction of working enterprises and the training of workers.
So
there will be a better chance that the money will go in the right direction.
To conclude
, the difference between rich countries and poor countries actually present and it will require not
only
action from the side of the poor,
but
also
help of rich countries. I hope that we will
see
new rich and strong countries on the world stage in the future, despite the fact that this will be quite difficult to achieve.

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