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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global’s problems. What are causes of this problem?

Insufficient water is becoming a significant global’s issue. This affected to all living things and non-living things that exist. Long term solutions are required extensively meanwhile government should give a measure to mitigate this drastic problem.
Even though our planet is covered by 70% of water, not the entire amount for consumption and usability. This natural resource is rare and time-consuming to generate in order to use in a household. The lack of cleaning water is caused by several factors such as a rapid growth of human population, agriculture and cultivation and other businesses. According to an increasing of people, the usage of water supplies is higher. Moreover, agricultural industries demand a huge amount of water to be able to produce good quality crops, without it farmlands can dry out. While there have inadequate water supplies, manufacturers and others will not be able to succeed.
In order to alleviate this existing problem. The government should launch a campaign of making individuals acknowledge the risks of overusing of fresh water through media including encourage people to do a conservation of pure water to have sufficient water for future use. Majority should avoid to pollute and pour a trash into the source of water and use water mindfully.
In conclusion, overusing of global’s water may result as a severe consequences, threatening the environment and human being, therefore a strong measures must be operated to tackle this situation.
Insufficient water is becoming a significant global’s issue. This
affected
to all living things and non-living things that exist. Long term solutions
are required
extensively
meanwhile
government
should
give a measure to mitigate this drastic problem.

Even though
our planet
is covered
by 70% of water, not the entire amount for consumption and usability. This natural resource is rare and time-consuming to generate in order to
use
in a household. The lack of cleaning water
is caused
by several factors such as a rapid growth of human population, agriculture and cultivation and other businesses. According to an increasing of
people
, the usage of water supplies is higher.
Moreover
, agricultural industries demand a huge amount of water to be able to produce
good
quality crops, without it farmlands can dry out. While there have inadequate water supplies, manufacturers
and others
will not be able to succeed.

In order to alleviate this existing problem. The
government
should
launch a campaign of making individuals acknowledge the
risks
of overusing of fresh water through media including encourage
people
to do a conservation of pure water to have sufficient water for future
use
. Majority
should
avoid to pollute
and pour a trash into the source of water and
use
water
mindfully
.

In conclusion
, overusing of global’s water may result as a severe
consequences
, threatening the environment and human being,
therefore
a strong
measures
must
be operated
to tackle this situation.

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