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is it importan being talented or not

Many people are born with many types of talent. Some of them are known from them but some of them are not. Sport talent is very valuable thing these days. But every person does not need to be born with these talents. İf this person works hard, and he/she can be good at this sport.
As an example, it can be talked about different types of examples. Firstly, Dirk Kuyt who has played for Liverpool and Fenerbahçe is a good football player. He is not very talented player, but he worked very hard, and he did whatever they want from him. On the other hand, Lionel Messi can be given as an talented example. He is hilariously talented player. There are many discussions about the most talented and most successful player in the world. He does not have to work hard because he has every talent that you can imagine. As a last example, Emre Mor is very talented football player but he is very unresponsible person and he does not work at all. So, he could not be successful at all.
As it is seen these example, Talent is not everything and if someone is work hard, he/she can be good at whatever he/she what. Maybe a person is born with unlucky. However, if this person make decision for what he/she wants to do, he/she can achieve the goal. Of course, İt will not be easy, but in the end, the goal can be achieved. Everyone can say that easily, talent is not everything.
Many
people
are born with
many
types of talent.
Some
of them
are known
from them
but
some
of them are not. Sport talent is very valuable thing these days.
But
every person does not need to be born with these talents.
İf
this person works h
ard,
and he/she can be g
ood
at this sport.

As an example, it can
be talked
about d
ifferent
types of examples. F
irstly,
Dirk
Kuyt
who has played for Liverpool and
Fenerbahçe
is a g
ood
football player. He is not v
ery
talented player, b
ut
he worked v
ery
h
ard,
and he did whatever they want from him. O
n the other hand,
Lionel Messi can be g
iven
as
an
talented example. He is
hilariously
talented player. There are m
any
discussions about the most talented and most successful player in the world. He does not h
ave to
work h
ard
b
ecause
he has every talent that you can imagine. As a last example,
Emre
Mor
is v
ery
talented football player b
ut
he is v
ery
unresponsible
person and
he does not work at all. S
o,
he could not be successful at all.

As it is s
een
these example, Talent is not everything and if someone is work h
ard,
he/she can be g
ood
at whatever he/she what. Maybe a person is born with unlucky. H
owever,
if this person m
ake
decision for what he/she wants to do, he/she can achieve the goal. O
f course,
İt
will not be easy, bu
t i
n the en
d,
the goal can
be achieved
. Everyone can say that
easily
, talent is not everything.

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