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Happiness is like the delicious food that it supports Significations energy to help people getting better in their lives.

Happiness is like the delicious food that it supports Significations energy to help people getting better in their lives. Some people think that the studying age is the happiness time in their lives while the other thing the adults deserve more happiness. In my point of view, I prefer that the period of teenagers of the happiest time rather than adults.
Most of teenagers don’t have the stress of Money. They have parents for a Ford all spending and help their children only focus on studying. They don’t need to worry about the tuition fees or living expenses. Therefore, not to worry about money is the most happiness thing in the teenagers’ age. The more the teenagers have a lot of leisure time. Expect studying, they are also able to do numerous things, Such as hang out with friends, living the second languages or playing the school activities. These activities should make more friends and on the good memories as well.
On the other hand, the teenagers really want to become adults because of freedom. Becoming adults are not restricted by anyone. They can do whatever they like or buy anything they want. However, although it sounds like a tractive to becoming an adult, you will feel painful without self -discipline.
In conclusion, being an adult is tired of facing plenty of reality. Therefore, these realities could become the factors that make you unhappy. First, the teenager year are easy to get happiness time in their lives.
Happiness is like the delicious food that it supports Significations energy to
help
people
getting better in their lives.
Some
people
think
that the studying age is the happiness time in their lives while the other thing the adults deserve more happiness. In my point of view, I prefer that the period of teenagers of the happiest time
rather
than adults.

Most of teenagers don’t have the
stress
of Money. They have parents for a Ford all spending and
help
their children
only
focus on studying. They don’t need to worry about the tuition fees or living expenses.
Therefore
, not to worry about money is the most happiness thing in the teenagers’ age. The more the teenagers have
a lot of
leisure time.
Expect
studying, they are
also
able to do numerous things, Such as hang out with friends, living the second languages or playing the school activities. These activities should
make
more friends and on the
good
memories
as well
.

On the other hand
, the teenagers
really
want to become adults
because
of freedom. Becoming adults are not restricted by anyone. They can do whatever they like or
buy
anything they want.
However
, although it sounds like a
tractive
to becoming an adult, you will feel painful without self -discipline.

In conclusion
, being an adult
is tired
of facing
plenty
of reality.
Therefore
, these realities could become the factors that
make
you unhappy.
First
, the teenager year are easy to
get
happiness time in their lives.

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