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In 2013, the figure for pens stood at 10%, whereas that of erasers was five times higher (50%). The proportion pf purchased pencils was also 10%.
From 2013 to 2015, there was a moderate increase of 10% in the figure for pens. Similarly, the purchase of pencils followed an upward trend. By contrast, the proportion of erasers declined from 50% to 30%. Finally, the percentage value associated with paper remained unchanged (30%) over the same period.
In 2013, the figure for pens stood at 10%, whereas that of erasers was five times higher (50%). The proportion pf
purchased
pencils was
also
10%.

From 2013 to 2015, there was a moderate increase of 10% in the figure for pens.
Similarly
, the
purchase
of pencils followed an upward trend. By contrast, the proportion of erasers declined from 50% to 30%.
Finally
, the percentage value associated with paper remained unchanged (30%) over the same period.

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