Do you want to improve your writing?
Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback. It's free!


children should learn to manage their money

As a parent, you want the best for your children. This dose not necceary means that just best clothes and toys, but also means that you want them to be successfull. In order to do that, you need to teach them key lessons that impact what ever they will do in life. One importent key is how to manage money. So, yes I am totally agree that children should learn to manage their money at yonge age. I feel this way because two reasons.
To start with, without working experience of money, it is extremly difficult to be a responsible adult. I can not forget when my mother started giving me monthly allawance insted of daily one when I was 15 years old. I was so happy and I bought a lot of stuff with most of my money, ignoring the hour my mam spent it with me explaining how shold I not spend my money at once, and how should I put a plan for my monthly expensis. Offcourse, I ended up that month with no money to buy food at school. It was a great lesson for me which I use it untill now, If my mother had not teach me how to manage my money, I would not be responsible adult.
The other reason is taching children good money habit like saving, could help them to learn the displine and delayed gratification. For instant, my son learned that if he want to buy somthing extra like a video game, he have to save from his allawance. My son now has the happit of saving unlike my nephew, who have this impulsive purshases. I can tell that is due to his father, who was giving him money when ever he wants and never tought him how to safe. We can tell from this story how important to motivate our children to develop good monytary habit for thier future
As I have allustrate, children should learn to manage their money at young age, because this may help them to manage thier mony more succsefly in the future and becase this
As a parent, you want the best for your children. This dose not
necceary
means that
just
best clothes and toys,
but
also
means that you want them to be
successfull
. In order to do that, you need to teach them key lessons that impact what ever they will do in life. One
importent
key is how to manage money.
So
, yes I am
totally
agree
that children
should
learn to manage their money at
yonge
age. I feel this way
because
two reasons.

To
start
with, without working experience of money, it is
extremly
difficult to be a responsible adult. I can not forget when my mother
started
giving me monthly
allawance
insted
of daily one when I was 15 years
old
. I was
so
happy and I
bought
a lot of
stuff with most of my money, ignoring the hour my mam spent it with me explaining
how shold
I not spend my money at once, and how
should
I put a plan for my monthly
expensis
.
Offcourse
, I ended up that month with no money to
buy
food at school. It was a great lesson for me which I
use
it
untill
now
, If my mother had not
teach
me how to manage my money, I would not be responsible adult.

The other reason is
taching
children
good
money habit like saving, could
help
them to learn the
displine
and delayed gratification. For instant, my son learned that if he
want
to
buy
somthing
extra like a video game, he
have
to save from his
allawance
. My son
now
has the
happit
of saving unlike my nephew, who have this impulsive
purshases
. I can
tell
that is
due to his father, who was giving him money when ever he wants and never
tought
him how to safe. We can
tell
from this story how
important
to motivate our children to develop
good
monytary
habit for
thier
future


As I have
allustrate
, children
should
learn to manage their money at young age,
because
this may
help
them to manage
thier
mony
more
succsefly
in the future and
becase
this

Other IELTS writings:

  1. important fossils are now being sold to private ownership
  2. The bar graph compares the average population in India China USA Japan in the year 1950 to 2000 with⁵ a projection to 2050.
  3. introducing the cane told to Australia
  4. Describe a time you waited for something/someone to make a decision.
  5. Sustainable Development Goals
  6. Two days ago you had a meal at a well known restaurant.Unfortunately, you were very ill after the meal. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter, ● Describe wht you ate. ● Describe what you feel about the situation ● Ask them what they can do about it
  7. Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
  8. Public libraries provide a comprehensive collection of books to read.some people argue that they should also provide other hi-tech facilities like computer and Internet.do you agree or disagree with statement?
  9. Some people say that 'work from home' has reduced social interaction and has more disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?
  10. Speaking different languages has always been an extra advantage for an individual specially for students