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survey of about people's coffe and tea buying

The given bar graph above illustrates to us the information bout the ratio of conclusion about 2 products which are coffee and tea are purchased and drank's habit for residents in five Australian cities in las 4 weeks.
Overall, when we look at the bar chart in general, it can be seen that there were 5 different cities which were Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. Moreover, Melbourne had the highest percentage to went to the cafe. Brisbane and Adelaide had the lowest ratio buying fresh coffee.
Initially, getting back to the in detail, we can see that the most important rate is the ratio of going to a cafe in all cities. The percentage of peopl who live in Melbourne, which was approximately 64 percent. The ratio of getting instant coffee was similar in 5 cities. Furthermore, although buying fresh coffee's proportion is high enough in 3 cities which were Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, Brisbane, and Adelaide had the same ratios, which were about 35 percent.
The
given
bar graph above illustrates to us the information bout the ratio of conclusion about 2 products which are coffee and tea are
purchased
and drank's habit for residents in five Australian cities in
las
4 weeks.

Overall
, when we look at the bar chart
in general
, it can be
seen
that there were 5
different
cities which were Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Moreover
, Melbourne had the highest percentage to went to the
cafe
. Brisbane and Adelaide had the lowest ratio buying fresh coffee.

Initially
, getting back to the in detail, we can
see
that the most
important
rate is the ratio of going to a
cafe
in all cities. The percentage of
peopl
who
live
in Melbourne, which was approximately 64 percent. The ratio of getting instant coffee was similar in 5 cities.
Furthermore
, although buying fresh coffee's proportion is high
enough
in 3 cities which were Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart, Brisbane, and Adelaide had the same ratios, which were about 35 percent.

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