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Why do you think some people do not do sports?

Some people claim that we do not have free time to do sports, also some people state that we can’t afford their costs and payment for sports are just unnecessary expense in their lives. Hence two significant items that play role in people life are cost and time.
First, I strongly opine that most people are busy today and don’t have adequate time to do sports. On the other hand, based on researcher studies, people can allocate their free time to do sports, but they don’t have ability of time management. For instance, everybody can dedicate a part of weekend time for going to mountain or a park of vicinity their home and do some exercises like jogging or climb mounting with a weekly schedule despite they didn’t it. So subsequently they hesitated to do sports and avoid pushing their comfort zone.
Secondly, regarding the cost of sport, I suppose it dependent on choose type of sport anybody like them. As I mentioned above, some sports like jogging and climb mounting don’t need to spend any money. From my point of view, each costs of sport are invested on our body that help us to keeping in shape and long-term healthiness.
All in all, cut long story short, people do not do sports since lack of time management ability and awareness of sports cost according their budget. Definitely both of them lead to people separating from sports.
Some
people claim that we do not have free time to do sports,
also
some
people state that we can’t afford their costs and payment for sports are
just
unnecessary expense in their
lives
.
Hence
two significant items that play role in people life are cost and time.

First
, I
strongly
opine that most people are busy
today
and don’t have adequate time to do sports.
On the other hand
, based on researcher studies, people can allocate their free time to do sports,
but
they don’t have ability of time management.
For instance
, everybody can dedicate a part of weekend time for going to mountain or a park of vicinity their home and do
some
exercises like jogging or climb mounting with a weekly schedule despite they didn’t it.
So
subsequently
they hesitated to do sports and avoid pushing their comfort zone.

Secondly
, regarding the cost of sport, I suppose it dependent on choose type of sport anybody like them. As I mentioned above,
some
sports like jogging and climb mounting don’t need to spend any money. From my point of view, each costs of sport
are invested
on our body that
help
us to keeping in shape and long-term healthiness.

All in all,
cut
long story short, people do not do sports since lack of time management ability and awareness of sports cost according their budget. Definitely both of them lead to people separating from sports.

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