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Researchers say that majority of criminal commit crime again after being released from jails. In a way,'prisons have become the University of crime'. Do you agree or disagree with the given notion?

Researchers say that majority of criminal commit crime again after being released from jails. In a way, 'prisons have become the University of crime'. with the given notion? 1aq
Prisons were established with the aim of reformation in the character of a person, who has committed some crime, intentionally or inadverentently. However, now jails have lost their original purpose and somehow have become so called"the University of crime". personally, I do not agree with the given notion and I have myriad of views surrounding my opinion. It is commonly seen that a person who has served any jail term, often gets accustomed with the internal atmosphere of the jails and lose the fear of being prisoned, due to this leniency and lake of strictness inside. He /she get the company of some kind of people inside, which makes him or her feel better to stay inside the also this system is causing problem in this context, small offender is tortured and bullied so brutally that he or she does not feel any remorse to commit crime again after being released. In addition, government can also being cited responsible for this problem. there is no designed employment policy for criminals which coax them to indulge in crimes for bread winning. At the same time society can also be held accountable. It is usually seen that society tags a criminal to be criminal forever, which leaves no scope of improvement in the person. In the nutshell, the problem of criminals recommeting crimesis is taking whole new dimension with the time, hence some curative measures should be applied. In my opinion, cctv cameras should be installed in prison in order to keep a hawk eye inside the jails and to put in check on any anti social activities. at the same time society should be also changed it mind-set towards sach criminals. So that they can be re-established in the society with due respects. Also the criminals, habitats of committing crime should be given psychological treatment and counsellings in order to reform their character attitude.
Prisons
were established
with the aim of reformation in the character of a person, who has committed
some
crime
,
intentionally
or
inadverentently
.
However
,
now
jails
have lost their original purpose and somehow have become
so
called
"
the University of crime
"
.
personally
, I do not
agree
with the
given
notion and I have myriad of views surrounding my opinion. It is
commonly
seen
that a person who has served any
jail
term,
often
gets
accustomed with
the internal atmosphere of the
jails
and lose the fear of being
prisoned
, due to this leniency and lake of strictness
inside
. He /she
get
the
company
of
some
kind of
people
inside
, which
makes
him or her feel better to stay
inside
the
also
this system is causing problem in this context,
small
offender
is tortured
and bullied
so
brutally
that he or she does not feel any remorse to commit
crime
again after
being released
.
In addition
,
government
can
also
being cited
responsible for this problem.
there
is no designed employment policy for
criminals
which coax them to indulge in
crimes
for bread winning. At the same time
society
can
also
be held
accountable. It is
usually
seen
that
society
tags a
criminal
to be
criminal
forever, which
leaves
no scope of improvement in the person. In the nutshell, the problem of
criminals
recommeting
crimesis
is taking whole new dimension with the time,
hence
some
curative measures should
be applied
. In my opinion,
cctv
cameras should
be installed
in prison in order to
keep
a hawk eye
inside
the
jails
and to put in
check
on any
anti social
activities.
at
the same time
society
should be
also
changed
it mind-set towards
sach
criminals
.
So that
they can be re-established in the
society
with due respects.
Also
the
criminals
, habitats of committing
crime
should be
given
psychological treatment and
counsellings
in order to reform their character attitude.
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