Changes in medical system

One of the changes that the improvements in the medical system have generated is that the average number of years that a person lives is increasing and the hope of a good life continues to improve.
A person's life is based on their physical and mental health, which are very important for a person's development. If there is an improvement in the medical aspect that is relative to an increase in mental health.
By improving the medical system, diseases are reduced, treatments and procedures are generated to cure people, deaths are reduced, infections are stopped; an improvement if life increases. The advantages of this change far outweigh the disadvantages since although it costs a lot of money and effort, one of the things that cannot be recovered is life.
This change will make my people hope again since living in a pandemic and constant climate problems, good medicine will move us forward.
In many communities that live in poverty, without access to medicines, they live a life full of complications and obstacles, always worried about what would happen if they get sick since they will not be able to go to a good hospital. Removing that concern from people is another of the enormous advantages of this change.
In conclusion, we can realize how things would improve just by seeing how we live, how each country is facing the Covid 19 pandemic and the vaccines of said virus. How the countries with the greatest economy are rapidly vaccinating their entire population and saving as many people as possible
One of the changes that the improvements in the medical system have generated is that the average number of years that a person lives is increasing and the hope of a good life continues to
improve
.

A person's life
is based
on their physical and mental health, which are
very
important
for a person's development.
If
there is an improvement in the medical aspect
that is
relative to an increase in mental health.

By improving the medical system, diseases are
reduced
, treatments and procedures
are generated
to cure people, deaths are
reduced
, infections
are stopped
; an improvement if life increases. The advantages of this change far outweigh the disadvantages since although it costs
a lot of
money and effort, one of the things that cannot
be recovered
is life.

This change will
make
my people hope again since living in a pandemic and constant climate problems, good medicine will
move
us forward.

In
many
communities that live in poverty, without access to medicines, they live a life full of complications and obstacles, always worried about what would happen if they
get
sick since they will not be able to go to a good hospital. Removing that concern from people is another of the enormous advantages of this
change
.

In conclusion
, we can realize how things would
improve
just
by seeing how we live, how each country is facing the
Covid 19
pandemic and the vaccines of said virus. How the countries with the greatest economy are
rapidly
vaccinating their entire population and saving as
many
people as
possible

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