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Personal statement for a summer program

I have always wanted to know how doctors can insert machines into the human body, but I did not know how to start till I found out about biomedical engineering subject and while deeper searching I found out about this application, and since that I am interested in this field then. What encourages me to know better and study more in this field is that I am certain that biomedical engineering will improve humanity from either medicine and curing diseases or improve some genes in the animals and plants that might help humanity live a better life.
I have always wanted to know how doctors can insert machines into the human body,
but
I did not know how to
start
till I found out about biomedical engineering subject and while deeper searching I found out about this application, and since that I
am interested
in this field then. What encourages me to know better and study more in this field is that I am certain that biomedical engineering will
improve
humanity from either medicine and curing diseases or
improve
some
genes in the animals and plants that might
help
humanity
live
a better life.

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