The provided table shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year, before and after its refurbishment. The following pie charts also demonstrate the result of surveys asking about visitors satisfaction level during the above-mentioned two periods.

The provided table shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year, before and after its refurbishment. The following pie charts also demonstrate the result of surveys asking about visitors satisfaction level during the abovementioned two periods. As it can be seen, the total number of visitors has increased by 18 thousands after refurbishment, and 35 percent of them have been very satisfied, which is 20 percent more than before. The visitors who were satisfied also have increased by 10 percent after refurbishment. On the other hand, visitors who have expressed dissatisfaction and very dissatisfaction are reduced by 25 and 5 percent respectively after refurbishment. In both surveys 5 percent of the visitors had left no response, which make pie charts well-comparable. In conclusion, the overall look shows that refurbishment has made a positive impact of visitors, and as a result has increased the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum.
The provided table
shows
the number of visitors to
Ashdown
Museum during the year,
before
and after its refurbishment. The following pie charts
also
demonstrate the result of surveys asking about visitors satisfaction level during the
abovementioned
two periods. As it can be
seen
, the total number of visitors has increased by 18 thousands after refurbishment, and 35 percent of them have been
very
satisfied, which is 20 percent more than
before
. The visitors who
were satisfied
also
have increased by 10 percent after refurbishment.
On the other hand
, visitors who have expressed dissatisfaction and
very
dissatisfaction are
reduced
by 25 and 5 percent
respectively
after refurbishment. In both surveys 5 percent of the visitors had
left
no response, which
make
pie charts well-comparable.
In conclusion
, the
overall
look
shows
that refurbishment has made a
positive
impact of visitors, and
as a result
has increased the number of visitors to
Ashdown
Museum.

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  1. The provided table shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year, before and after its refurbishment. The following pie charts also demonstrate the result of surveys asking about visitors satisfaction level during the above-mentioned two periods.
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