The maps describe the change of an island after being impacted by tourism development.

The maps describe the change of an island after being impacted by tourism development.
Overall, based on the introduction of tourism businesses to the island, there was a change regarding the majority of the island, facilitated with different services like dining and housing, while the eastern part seems to stay the same as before. In addition, a pier was constructed to be the island’s entrance, and the island approximately stretches 250 metres.
The island before changing by the tourism facilities construction only has trees which were occupied in the northeastern and southern area. There is a beach that stretches about 30 metres from the western island to the ocean.
After affected by tourism development, the scenery of the island changed. There are two accommodations which both consisted of six buildings and a circular footpath was surrounded by those buildings. The first one is at the center of the island, and this construction is within walking distance of palm trees. At the western side of the first accommodation, there is a reception building was located and it had a vehicle track connected to the pier for tourists to land by boat. To the north of the reception area, there is a restaurant which is connected by a short track. The beach is used for swimming that is linked to the second accommodation which is on the western area of the island and also led to the reception section. Basically, there is only the eastern part is still the same as before.
The maps
describe
the
change
of an island after
being impacted
by tourism development.

Overall
, based on the introduction of tourism businesses to the island, there was a
change
regarding the majority of the island, facilitated with
different
services like dining and housing, while the eastern part seems to stay the same as before.
In addition
, a pier
was constructed
to be the island’s entrance, and the island approximately stretches 250
metres
.

The island before changing by the tourism facilities construction
only
has trees which
were occupied
in the northeastern and southern area. There is a beach that stretches about 30
metres
from the western island to the ocean.

After
affected
by tourism development, the scenery of the island
changed
. There are two accommodations which both consisted of six buildings and a circular footpath
was surrounded
by those buildings. The
first
one is at the center of the island, and this construction is within walking distance of palm trees. At the western side of the
first
accommodation, there is a reception building was
located and
it had a vehicle
track
connected to the pier for tourists to land by boat. To the north of the reception area, there is a restaurant which
is connected
by a short
track
. The beach is
used
for swimming that
is linked
to the second accommodation which is on the western area of the island and
also
led to the reception section.
Basically
, there is
only
the eastern part is
still
the same as before.

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