People argue that wealthy countries should donate money to poor countries in order to gain food and study or the government of poorer countries should solve these problems on their own.

People argue that wealthy countries should donate money to poor countries in order to gain food and study or the government of poorer countries should solve these problems on their own. This essay will talk about both sides of view.
From my point of view, there are a number of poor countries in the world on every continent. These countries may be in poor economic status result from numerous reasons such as a civil wall, drugs, religious problem, or been conquered by other countries. As we can see on international news that children in these countries can not afford high education or even basic education or school. a number of children have malnutrition and died from infection. On the other hand high economic status countries, Children have a high level of education, food, house or entertainment. The wealthy nation should share a number of money to donate in order to prepare basic sanitary. As we live in the same world and kind.
On the other hand. Government of poor countries should find ways to improve their nation. For example, stop all the corruption, religious war and civil war. Meanwhile, they can loan a number of money from World Bank to provide a basic factor to live for their population. The most essential thing is to build a better future by supporting their children to live well and eat well.
In conclusion, wealthy countries should show a number of mercy by donating a number of money, food, drug, and education to a poorer one. Also, The poorer countries should solve their problem. To make a better place for their children.
People
argue that wealthy countries
should
donate money to poor countries in order to gain food and study or the
government
of poorer countries
should
solve these problems on their
own
. This essay will talk about both sides of view.

From my point of view, there are a number of poor countries in the
world
on every continent. These countries may be in poor economic status result from numerous reasons such as a civil wall, drugs, religious problem, or
been conquered
by other countries. As we can
see
on international news that children in these countries can not afford high
education
or even basic
education
or school.
a
number of children have malnutrition and
died
from infection. On the other hand high economic status countries, Children have a high level of
education
, food,
house
or entertainment. The wealthy nation
should
share a number of money to donate in order to prepare basic sanitary. As we live in the same
world
and kind.

On the other hand.
Government
of poor countries
should
find ways to
improve
their nation.
For example
,
stop
all the corruption, religious war and civil war. Meanwhile, they can loan a number of money from
World
Bank to provide a basic factor to live for their population. The most essential thing is to build a better future by supporting their children to live well and eat well.

In conclusion
, wealthy countries
should
show
a number of mercy by donating a number of money, food, drug, and
education
to a poorer one.
Also
, The poorer countries
should
solve their problem. To
make
a better place for their children.

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