Nowadays fast development in all areas of social life has not only positive but also negative effects on global population, especially on human mental health.

Nowadays, being as a worldwide society claims to have been accepted more than before. Promotion in wellbeing, education and commerce are some crucial aspects which help poorer countries to improve their situation. The issue is whether more wealthy nations should help poorer ones in this issue or not. Indeed, such participation is seemed to have a positive effect on both of them.
It is worth bearing in mind that countries are influenced by each other socially, economically, politically and commercially. At first blush, gathering nations together for comprehensive cooperation seems to be impossible because is needed infrastructural preparation and profound sense of responsibility. The more upper class nations tend to participate in global enhancing qualification, the more universal society will be protected from devastating outcomes. For instance, diplomatic or economical predicaments in developing countries can lead to inappropriate consequences such as war and famine which threatens the lives of thousands globally. Considering this issue the necessity of international involvement can be justified.
Looked at from a health point of view, it should be noted that widespread participation can improve health standards all over the world and ensure global safety. Challenging tough it takes much time, money and energy, it is worth. For example, if countries had not participated effectively some years ago, they would not have eradicated some contagious diseases such as rubella and tuberculosis. As providing needed facilities such as effective vaccines and drugs requires noticeable budget and considering that the majority of countries engaged are usually from deprived areas, global collaboration seems to be essential.
In the final analysis, it is vitally imperative that enhancing living standards in poorer countries needs a comprehensive public effort especially rich countries. since there is a mutually beneficial relationship, wealthy countries should be encouraged to get involved in this issue more effectively.
Nowadays, being as a worldwide society claims to have been
accepted
more than
before
. Promotion in wellbeing, education and commerce are
some
crucial aspects which
help
poorer countries to
improve
their situation. The issue is whether more wealthy nations
should
help
poorer ones in this issue or not.
Indeed
, such participation
is seemed
to have a
positive
effect on both of them.

It is worth bearing in mind that countries
are influenced
by each other
socially
,
economically
,
politically
and
commercially
. At
first
blush, gathering nations together for comprehensive cooperation seems to be impossible
because
is needed
infrastructural preparation and profound sense of responsibility. The
more upper
class
nations tend to participate in
global
enhancing qualification, the more universal society will
be protected
from devastating outcomes.
For instance
, diplomatic or economical predicaments in developing countries can lead to inappropriate consequences such as war and famine which threatens the
lives
of thousands globally. Considering this issue the necessity of international involvement can
be justified
.

Looked at from a health point of view, it
should
be noted
that widespread participation can
improve
health standards all over the world and ensure
global
safety. Challenging tough it takes much time, money and energy, it is worth.
For example
, if countries had not participated
effectively
some
years ago, they would not have eradicated
some
contagious diseases such as rubella and tuberculosis. As providing needed facilities such as effective vaccines and drugs requires noticeable budget and considering that the majority of countries engaged are
usually
from deprived areas,
global
collaboration seems to be essential.

In the final analysis, it is
vitally
imperative that enhancing living standards in poorer countries needs a comprehensive public effort
especially
rich countries.
since
there is a
mutually
beneficial relationship, wealthy countries
should
be encouraged
to
get
involved in this issue more
effectively
.

Other IELTS writings:

  1. The concept of keeping old people at specialized houses is dramatically increasing nowadays. Lots of adult tend to send their parents to these establishments to provide comfortable and carefree finish of life.
  2. It is obvious, that robots are one of the most striking example of global technological modernization. While the majority of people suppose, that robots will play a key role in the development of all mankind, others claim that such automatic machines are unpredictable and can cause various dramatic troubles in the future.
  3. In today’s globalised word, as cities become increasingly cosmopolitan and culturally diverse, it is highly important to nurture social harmony between natives and newcomers. It is felt that in order to achieve this laudable goal host cities should provide language courses and well-thought-out employment programmes for newcomers.
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