Nowadays children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports. Why is it happening? Does it have a positive or negative effect on their development?

There is no iota of doubt that, youngsters spend their are most of time playing computer games instead of outdoor sports activities. This phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to children, however sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to some. The following paragraphs would shed light on positive and negative effects on their development.

To commence with the first notion that, with the help of advancement in computer games children are becoming more addictive because playing games on personal computer its feel like real life visual. In addition, rather than going outside to play youngsters feel comfortable infront of sitting with computer. I would like to site an example of e gaming which attracts juvenile to play computer games with high graphics quality and higher capacity processors. Additionally, portability of computers in salad days adding more extra benefits to adolescents and admiring this effortless entertain to the way.

On the flip side of coin, there are some nasty consequences as well. firstly, sitting infront of the computer screen put bad impact on children's eyesight. Secondly, it will be harmful for their physical and mental strength because if children cannot go to outside and play. As a result, there physical body may disease prone health. Furthermore, excessive use of computer gaming will not develop the social skills a child needs.

In the conclusion. I personally believe that positive impacts are number the negative impacts. Although, advancement in the computer world will remain some major issue of the decreased popularity of sports, while some efforts should made to minimise the letter one.
There is no iota of doubt that, youngsters spend
their
are
most of time
playing computer games
instead
of outdoor sports activities. This phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to children,
however
sometimes
a couple of problems emerge due to
some
. The following paragraphs would shed light on
positive
and
negative
effects on their development.

To commence with the
first
notion that, with the
help
of advancement in computer games children are becoming more addictive
because
playing games on personal computer its feel like real life visual.
In addition
,
rather
than going outside to play youngsters feel comfortable in
front o
f sitting with computer. I would like to site an example of e gaming which attracts juvenile to play computer games with high graphics quality and higher capacity processors.
Additionally
, portability of computers in salad days adding more extra benefits to adolescents and admiring this effortless entertain to the way.

On the flip side of coin, there are
some
nasty consequences
as well
. firs
tly, si
tting infr
ont of
the computer screen put
bad
impact on children's eyesight.
Secondly
, it will be harmful for their physical and mental strength
because
if children cannot go t
o outside and
play.
As a result
, there physical body may disease prone health.
Furthermore
, excessive
use
of computer gaming will not develop the social
skills
a child needs.

In the conclusion. I
personally
believe that
positive
impacts are number the
negative
impacts. Although, advancement in the computer world will remain
some
major issue of the decreased popularity of sports, while
some
efforts should made t
o mi
nimi
se the l
etter one.

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