In recent decades, according to a number of people, the swift rate of progress of some high-tech in communication and commutation which have been imprinting on our daily life has made an impression on people, nations, and world negatively.

In recent decades, according to a number of people, the swift rate of progress of some high-tech in communication and commutation which have been imprinting on our daily life has made an impression on people, nations, and world negatively. I tend to agree with this argument, nevertheless, I believe the benefits of this development outweigh its drawbacks and in this essay, I will discuss both sides of the topic. On one hand, thanks to the developing technology people around the world able to connect with each other remotely in seconds. Indeed, this fast connection along with improving the transportation system has assisted to boost international trade, growth of the global economy, and in summary, led to the development of more and more nations in all fields. To illustrate this, in the past, businessmen for marketing the local goods internationally, irrespective of wasting huge time and energy, it was impossible for them to receive all markets and this, by all means, tended to be a restriction for expanding a business. While today not only does all commerce access whole world markets but also transactions are done quickly and without any requirement for traveling.
In recent decades, according to a number of people, the swift rate of progress of
some
high-tech in communication and commutation which have been imprinting on our daily life has made an impression on people, nations, and
world
negatively
. I tend to
agree
with this argument,
nevertheless
, I believe the benefits of this development outweigh its drawbacks and in this essay, I will discuss both sides of the topic. On one hand, thanks to the developing technology people around the
world
able to connect with each other
remotely
in seconds.
Indeed
, this
fast
connection along with improving the transportation system has assisted to boost international trade, growth of the global economy, and in summary, led to the development of more and more nations in all fields. To illustrate this, in the past, businessmen for marketing the local
goods
internationally
, irrespective of wasting huge time and energy, it was impossible for them to receive all markets and this, by all means, tended to be a restriction for expanding a business. While
today
not
only
does all commerce access whole
world
markets
but
also
transactions
are done
quickly
and without any requirement for traveling.

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