In many crime cases, despite the punishment criminals got, they keep committing crimes.

In many crime cases, despite the punishment criminals got, they keep committing crimes. This considerate as an important legal issue and sociologists and psychologists discussing nowadays. As a social phenomenon, the criminal keep committing crimes even get punished due the social rejection. Therefor, to face this problem, social survey program should take place to help criminals finding their ways after prison, and secondly, reinforce the psychological support to reveal the deepest motivation inside the criminals.
Every criminal have faced the social rejection in some point even get punished. People considerate criminals as a bad person which prevent theme to restate a social relationship with. Hence, the criminal see that his life is destroyed and no hope for reestablishment, especially when looking for a job they often face refute, which make theme feel ashamed all the time and for some criminals that feeling push theme to recommit the crime.
Preventing the re-offending can be taken place by establishing a social survey program and providing a psychological support. Firstly, the social survey program follow the criminal after prison to help theme restore their life especially for those who spent a long time in prison. So this program can provide courses to start a career or a project. Secondly, the deepest we look in the problem the better the problem will be solved and that what a psychologist looking for when revealing the indirect motivations of criminals. Thus, by the psychological support the problem can be solved from the inside.
In conclusion, to prevent the social rejection, as the main reason to keep committing the same crime, a deeply looking into this phenomenon in the social and the psychological aspects to find out the indirect motifs put end to re-offend in the future of the criminal.
In
many
crime cases, despite the punishment criminals
got
, they keep committing crimes. This considerate as an
important
legal issue and sociologists and psychologists discussing nowadays. As a social phenomenon, the criminal keep committing crimes even
get
punished due the social rejection. Therefor, to face this problem, social survey program should take place to
help
criminals finding their ways after prison, and
secondly
, reinforce the psychological support to reveal the deepest motivation inside the criminals.

Every criminal have faced the social rejection in
some
point even
get
punished.
People
considerate criminals as a
bad
person which
prevent
theme to restate a social relationship with.
Hence
, the criminal
see
that his life is
destroyed
and no hope for reestablishment,
especially
when looking for a job they
often
face refute, which
make
theme feel ashamed all the time and for
some
criminals that feeling push theme to recommit the crime.

Preventing the re-offending can
be taken
place by establishing a social survey program and providing a psychological support.
Firstly
, the social survey program follow the criminal after prison to
help
theme restore their life
especially
for those who spent a long time in prison.
So
this program can provide courses to
start
a career or a project.
Secondly
, the deepest we look in the problem the better the problem will
be solved
and that what a psychologist looking for when revealing the indirect motivations of criminals.
Thus
, by the psychological support the problem can
be solved
from the inside.

In conclusion
, to
prevent
the social rejection, as the main reason to keep committing the same crime, a
deeply
looking into this phenomenon in the social and the psychological aspects to find out the indirect motifs put
end
to re-offend in the future of the criminal.

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