In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses, so people can build houses in their own styles rather than building them with the same style as the old houses in the local area. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A number of cities allow people to build their houses regardless of its own style. In my point of view the drawbacks of this policy outshine its benefits.
Every city has its own style which should be respected. Building carry history of the city, giving the timber that makes it special. Thus, respecting the style of buildings protect the heritage for coming generations to keep them in touch with their background
Modern style is influenced by globalization which transform cities to have less identity. Indeed, this style base on technological advances to bring more comfort and easiness in usage to the householders. In addition, entrepreneurs, nowadays, have more commercialized tendency in their work. Hence, they aim to higher their income by mitigating building expenses as much as possible resulting a building without any timber.
To sum up, the focus of modernity highlight features like comfort, profitability, and technological integration blurs the characteristic of the city.
A number of cities
allow
people
to build their
houses
regardless of its
own
style. In my point of view the drawbacks of this policy outshine its benefits.

Every city has its
own
style which should
be respected
. Building carry history of the city, giving the timber that
makes
it special.
Thus
, respecting the style of buildings protect the heritage for coming generations to
keep
them in touch with their background

Modern style
is influenced
by globalization which transform cities to have less identity.
Indeed
, this style base on technological advances to bring more comfort and easiness in usage to the householders.
In addition
, entrepreneurs, nowadays, have more commercialized tendency in their work.
Hence
, they aim to higher their income by mitigating building expenses as much as possible resulting a building without any timber.

To sum up, the focus of modernity highlight features like comfort, profitability, and technological integration blurs the characteristic of the city.

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