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Letter to editor of international magazine editor

Letter to editor of international magazine editor b3X
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to an article published in March 2021 edition of your reputed magazine Business Traveller. The article in “Heaven on Earth” section on state of Kashmir misstates the place to be part of Pakistan and a Muslim majority state, which should be rectified on immediate basis. The state of Kashmir is an integral part of India and considered as “Jewel Crown” by many. After reading the article published in recent edition of magazine, the writer describes the place as a Muslim majority state and reports cases of foreign nationals being ill treated by local administration. However, on a contrary, the residents of the state is amalgamation of religion and culture and have nearly 40% of Hindu population, 30% of Christians and 30% Muslims residing in harmony. Due to incorrect reporting of these facts the tourists now feel unsafe to visit the place causing an impact on entire economy which rely on tourism as major benefactor. Furthermore, the impact can also be felt by looking at steep fall of 30% in number of tourist visiting the place this month even after being considered as one of most favourable months with pleasant weather. I would like you to take an immediate action on this issue and re-print an updated version of article with apology note in upcoming edition to mend the damage made to some extent so that the readers can read through the correct artefacts and can plan the visit to actual heaven on earth. I look forward to hear back from you soon confirming suggested action been taken into account and worked upon. Yours Faithfully, Mohit Arora
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter
with regards to
an
article
published in March 2021 edition of your reputed magazine Business
Traveller
. The
article
in “Heaven on Earth” section on
state
of Kashmir misstates the
place
to be part of Pakistan and a Muslim majority
state
, which should
be rectified
on immediate basis. The
state
of Kashmir is an integral part of India and considered as “Jewel Crown” by
many
. After reading the
article
published in recent edition of magazine, the writer
describes
the
place
as a Muslim majority
state
and reports cases of foreign nationals being
ill treated
by local administration.
However
, on a contrary, the residents of the
state
is amalgamation of religion and culture and have
nearly
40% of Hindu population, 30% of Christians and 30% Muslims residing in harmony. Due to incorrect reporting of these facts the tourists
now
feel unsafe to visit the
place
causing an impact on entire economy which rely on tourism as major benefactor.
Furthermore
, the impact can
also
be felt
by looking at steep fall of 30% in number of tourist visiting the
place
this month even after
being considered
as one of most
favourable
months with pleasant weather. I would like you to take an immediate action on this issue and re-print an updated version of
article
with apology note in upcoming edition to mend the damage made to
some
extent
so
that the readers can read through the correct
artefacts
and can plan the visit to actual heaven on earth. I look forward
to hear
back from you
soon
confirming suggested action
been taken
into account and worked upon. Yours
Faithfully
,
Mohit
Arora
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