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Some people think community service in secondary schools should be compulsory. Do you agree or disagree?

Currently, community service is extremely integral part of the society. It is common even in secondary schools so that school staff help people who are in poor livelihood. However, it is disagreed that community service in secondary schools should be obligatory. In this essay I will prove several to my disagreement with examples below. In most countries compulsory schools are exploited by the government to community services in order to support social activities. As a result, it distracts the children from studying regularly. Additionally, one of the painful effects is decreasing efficiency of tuition. However, it might be beneficial for the society, not education. Therefore, it would be better if involving schools, institutions, and even top-tier universities were become free from community service. On the other hand, more social activities like community service may serve to broaden the horizon of people who are involved in. Moreover it can be seen one of the vital causes for intensifying their sense of humanity and refusing vanity simultaneously. This case is considered partly fruitful, not soundly. Taking everything into consideration, children would be devoid of any physical fatigue and obligatory services if the government composed on organization which is responsible for community. Consequently, more time will be available to upgrade the effectiveness of teaching, students also be more capable of getting academic achievements.
Currently
, community service is
extremely
integral part of the society. It is common even in secondary schools
so
that school staff
help
people
who are in poor livelihood.
However
, it
is disagreed
that community service in secondary schools should be obligatory. In this essay I will prove several to my disagreement with examples below. In most countries compulsory schools
are exploited
by the
government
to community services in order to support social activities.
As a result
, it distracts the children from studying
regularly
.
Additionally
, one of the painful effects is decreasing efficiency of tuition.
However
, it might be beneficial for the society, not education.
Therefore
, it would be better if involving schools, institutions, and even top-tier universities
were become
free from community service.
On the other hand
, more social activities like community service may serve to broaden the horizon of
people
who
are involved
in.
Moreover
it can be
seen
one of the vital causes for intensifying their sense of humanity and refusing vanity
simultaneously
. This case
is considered
partly fruitful, not
soundly
. Taking everything into consideration, children would be devoid of any physical fatigue and obligatory services if the
government
composed on organization which is responsible for community.
Consequently
, more time will be available to upgrade the effectiveness of teaching, students
also
be more capable of getting academic achievements.

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