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Some people say history is more important than science and technology at schools.

Past, future and present, these three times are connected to each other, and that is why at schools there are history lessons besides science and technology. Without knowing the culture and the history of your country, it would probably be harder the achieve success. This is an argue topic for some people, which lesson in more significant than the other, history or science.
First of all, there is no hesitate that science and technology lesson’s importance for today. We are living in a technology world, our mobile phones, computers, transportations systems of our cities, deveices at the hospitals and etc. All of these are related to science and that’s because some people believe that these lessons are the most important ones at schools even more than history. They think that if children at school and university should have these subjects much more than history, beause history is not directly related to technology and scientific inventions.
On the other hand, the other group say that history is the most important subject at schools. They do not deny science, maths and technology, but they are aware the importance of history. This people are a bit more close to social sciences and think that without knowing the culture and the history of your country, you can not be successfull in science and technology. You need to understand the people, their necessities and this is possible by knowing the history.
In conclusion, future is related with science and technology, this is the fact. But according to my perspective, history is also has a significant importance for youngs, we should teach them the culture, and if they know their past and history, I believe that they will be more successfull merging this with science.
Past, future and present, these three times
are connected
to each other, and
that is
why at schools there are history lessons
besides
science and technology. Without knowing the culture and the history of your country, it would
probably
be harder
the achieve
success. This is
an argue
topic for
some
people, which lesson in more significant than the other, history or science.

First of all
, there is no hesitate that science and technology lesson’s importance for
today
. We are living in a technology world, our mobile phones, computers, transportations systems of our cities,
deveices
at the hospitals
and etc
. All of these are related to science and that’s
because
some
people believe that these lessons are the most
important
ones at schools even more than history. They
think
that if children at school and university should have these subjects much more than history,
beause
history is not
directly
related to technology and scientific inventions.

On the other hand, the other group say that history is the most
important
subject at schools. They do not deny science,
maths
and technology,
but
they are aware the importance of history. This people are a bit more close to social sciences and
think
that without knowing the culture and the history of your country, you can not be
successfull
in science and technology. You need to understand the people, their necessities and this is possible by knowing the history.

In conclusion
, future is related with science and technology, this is the fact.
But
according to my perspective, history is
also
has a significant importance for
youngs
, we should teach them the culture, and if they know their past and history, I believe that they will be more
successfull
merging this with science.

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