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some people believe that people at old age not work, agree or disagree

In contemporary era, doing job become necessity to pay daily expenses of living. It is argued that old people should not work due to their declining physical strength. I believe that people in early old age should work, as it is essential to keep their health in balance and enjoy their life rather than becoming financial burden on their offspring's. To begin with, firstly working on old age will keep the people more healthy in terms of physical and mental status. As they regularly use their critical thinking and physically work tp complete the task, it will be beneficial for their body to remains in functioning order. For instance, old people working in gardens will
In contemporary era, doing job become necessity to pay daily expenses of living. It
is argued
that old people should not work due to their declining physical strength. I believe that people in early old age should work, as it is essential to
keep
their health in balance and enjoy their life
rather
than becoming financial burden on their offspring's. To
begin
with,
firstly
working on old age will
keep
the people more healthy in terms of physical and mental status. As they
regularly
use
their critical thinking and
physically
work
tp
complete the task, it will be beneficial for their body to remains in functioning order.
For instance
, old people working in gardens
will

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