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Social Media and Internet use, and it’s implication on youngsters and the right use

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Unlimited internet and different Social Media platform have made the world quite small in term’s of reachability and access to people at large, which has its own potential in terms of damaging the society at large as well and especially among the millennials who has unlimited access to social platforms at their will may it be socially or professionally. Nevertheless, unsupervised access among the youngsters can mislead to many unkindly situations for example a lot terrorist groups are now active on social media and have form groups to motivate youngster to join groups like ISIS, they make youngster their follower and also make them disciples in the name of Jehad of a particular community or a belief, it can also lead to various other issues like youngster commit online selling fraud, creating fake ID’s for online abusing, which can lead them to a wrong direction in life rather than focusing on what they have to achieve to make life successful. One the solutions is to strictly monitor the use of household computer, cellular phone and system accessed by these youngsters at home while their parents are busy earning their living, we should also continuously talk to our kids and understand their psychology towards the happenings around them, coach them to use their time wisely and also use social media, access to internet for the betterment of their life, country and the humanity at large. Even though social media is a dangerous but if you use it wisely then it can become a blessing in disguise and hence to build a nation the youngsters need to use it wisely and supervise where required as part of nation building process and development of a successful individual.
Unlimited internet and
different
Social
Media
platform have made the world quite
small
in term’s of
reachability
and
access
to
people
at large, which has its
own
potential in terms of damaging the society at large
as well
and
especially
among the millennials who has unlimited
access
to
social
platforms at their will may it be
socially
or
professionally
.
Nevertheless
, unsupervised
access
among the youngsters can mislead to
many
unkindly
situations
for example
a
lot
terrorist groups are
now
active on
social
media
and have form groups to motivate
youngster
to
join
groups like ISIS, they
make
youngster
their follower and
also
make
them disciples in the name of
Jehad
of a particular community or a belief, it can
also
lead to various other issues like
youngster
commit online selling fraud, creating fake ID’s for online abusing, which can lead them to a
wrong
direction in life
rather
than focusing on what they
have to
achieve to
make
life successful. One the solutions is to
strictly
monitor the
use
of household computer, cellular phone and system accessed by these youngsters at home while their parents are busy earning their living, we should
also
continuously
talk to our kids and understand their psychology towards
the happenings around them
, coach them to
use
their time
wisely
and
also
use
social
media
,
access
to internet for the betterment of their life, country and the humanity at large.
Even though
social
media
is a
dangerous
but
if you
use
it
wisely
then it can become a blessing in disguise and
hence
to build a nation the youngsters need to
use
it
wisely
and supervise where required as part of nation building process and development of a successful individual.
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