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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

Everything has two sides, and “the impact of technology on human relationships” is no exception. We cannot deny how much technology has changed a person’s reaction to others in his family and surrounding society. In my opinion, technology has influenced our life aspects and changed their relationships with other people. Recently, we have got various fast and cheap ways to call our family and friends. Moreover, some technologies give us the opportunity to see and talk with them at the same time. In addition, we are informed daily about the latest updates and news about our friends and family so that we can remember birthdays, proms and even wedding anniversaries. In addition, these methods make it faster and easier to call and congratulate another person. On the other hand, many believe that technology adversely affects individual relationships. They believe that if we did not have such technologies, we would regularly visit each other. Not only that, but people will not be isolated from each other, especially those who are dependent on the use of social networks. In fact, people rarely talk face to face with each other. In particular, people are changing a lot due to their use of Facebook. This is one of the vital reasons for the decline in confidence and self-esteem. As you can see, even if we have some kind of bad effects from the technology and how it changed the way people communicate with each other, we still have a lot more effects. We can get many simple and cheap ways to contact each other. In fact, technology has improved our lives and the way we communicate with each other.

Everything has two sides, and the ‘effects of technology on people’s relationship’ is not an exception. We cannot deny how much technology transformed the individual reaction with others in his family and the surrounding community.

In my opinion, technology has
affected
and transformed our life aspects and dealing with other people in a
good
way. Recently, we have
different
fast
and
cheap
methods to call our family and friends.
Moreover
,
some
technologies are giving us chances to
see
and talk with them at the same time.
In addition
, we
are informed
on a daily basis with the last updates and news about our friends and family,
so
we can remember the birthdays, graduation parties and even
marriage
anniversary.
Furthermore
, these methods
make
it faster and easier to call and congratulate another individual.

On the other hand,
many
people believe that technology is affecting individual relationship
badly
. They opine that, if we did not have these kinds of technology, we would have been visiting each other
regularly
.

Not
only
that,
but
individuals will not
be isolated
from each other,
especially
those who
are addicted
to using social networking platforms.
 
As a matter of fact, people become talking to each other in a face-to-face method
rarely
.
In particular
, people’s personalities are changing
so
much,
because
of addiction in using Facebook. It’s one of the vital reasons to decrease confidence and self-esteem.

As can be
seen
, even if we have
some
bad
effects of technology and how it
changed
the way people contact each other,
but
we
still
have much more effects. We can obtain
many
easy and cheaper methods to contact each other. In fact, technology has enhanced our life and the way we are contacting each other.
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