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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

Technological developments in this modern era have changed our communication. Advances in communication networks have played an important role in bringing people together. In my opinion, there are pros and cons of this development, and this essay will analyze how technologies have changed the types of relationships created by people. In ancient times, people used letters and telegrams to interact with each other. With the advent of modern communication systems such as telephone and the Internet, people can collaborate more effectively. For example, we can communicate by e-mail, rather than by mail, and a businessman can hold online meetings through conference calls. Another reason is the widespread use of social networks via the Internet; for example, Facebook, where men and women can now make friends on the Internet and communicate with them through mail, message and online chat. Skype videoconferencing has improved the relationship between teacher and students. Online messaging platforms such as mIRC have given people the opportunity to choose their own discussion chat rooms. There are more ways to communicate now than in the past. All these advances in technology have their advantages and disadvantages. Letters, notes, and telegrams are replaced by emails and text messages. You can hire human resources through online video conferencing, which eliminates the need for physical presence and travel needs. Now we can communicate more through Facebook, Pinterest, Google+, Instagram, Orkut and so on. Although this can be regarded as positive developments, they have some negative aspects. These events isolated people and prevented interaction in the real world. For example, young people, in particular, prefer to communicate with people on the Internet rather than communicate with them in the real world. In conclusion, technology has undoubtedly revolutionized the way we interact and communicate, but significantly reduced interaction in the real world. Although these virtual relationships tend to be positive, we must not deny the importance of physical interaction in our lives.

Technological developments in this modern era have transformed the way we
socialise
. Advancements in communication networks have played a vital role in bringing people closer. In my opinion, there are both pros and cons of this development and this essay will
analyse
how technology has
changed
the types of relationships made by
people
.

In ancient times, people
used
letters and telegrams to interact with each other. With the advent of modern communication systems like the telephone and the Internet, people can collaborate more
effectively
. For instance, we can interact through emails
rather
than letter and businessman can have online meetings through the conference calls.

Another reason is the widespread
use
of social networks over the internet; for instance, Facebook, where
men
and women can now
make
friends online and interact with them through the post, message and online chat. Video conferencing in the form of Skype has
improved
instructor and student relationship. Online messaging platforms like
mIRC
has
given
people the luxury to choose their
own
discussion-based chat rooms. There are more ways to
socialise
now than they
used
to be
in past
.

All these advancements in technology
come
up with their merits and demerits. Letters, memos and telegrams
are replaced
by emails and text messages. Human resource hiring can
be done
through online video conferencing which has eliminated the need for physical presence and travelling requirement. We can now mingle more through Facebook, Pinterest, Google+, Instagram and
Orkut
and
so
on. Though one can regard these as
positive
developments, they do have
some
negative
aspects. These developments have isolated people and discouraged real-world interaction. For instance, youth,
in particular
, prefers to choose to mix up with people online
rather
than
socialising
with them in the real world.

To conclude
, technology has no doubt
revolutionised
the way we interact and hang out
but
has
greatly
reduced
real-world interaction. Though these virtual relations tend to be
positive
, we should not deny the importance of physical interaction in our
lives
.
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