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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

For a real relationship between two people, face-to-face communication and time are needed in order to really get to know each other. No matter what people think, all people admire the sense of searching, even if it's a lie. The digital world has created the feeling that you can be what someone wants to be online. However, I believe that the way people know each other on the Internet and the type of relationship they establish have actually changed for the worse. Instead of being a true friend to the people around each other, most of them turn inward, forgetting the true definition of a friend. People have feelings, they sometimes feel overwhelmed and do not always smile, but the Internet shows only those happy moments that prevent it from being fully known. The types of friendship people make these days are quick and short-lived. In real friendship, people see each other at the best and worst times and stay there for each other. It can never be compared with friendship on a social network. You can only get to know someone by spending time together, because the Internet cannot replace the exchange of experience and personal communication. However, thanks to the Internet, people can make friends from anywhere in the world, which was completely impossible in the past era. Finding and communicating with friends at school and college is an advantage that the Internet offers us. However, true friendship is impossible if two people do not spend time together, share their common interests, talk a lot and help each other both in good and bad times. By right, life is intended to live and have many physical experiences associated with the physical presence of another person. Instead of being a true friend to people around them, they spend time on the Internet to make friends. This, in my opinion, is a negative aspect of the digital era. In conclusion, friendships outside borders and talking with childhood friends may be the benefits of the digital era, but the way we become addicted to technology and the way we pretend to support our online friendships negatively affects our personal lives, moral and social aspects.

A true relationship between two people
requires
face to face communication and time to
truly
get
to know each other. Regardless of what humans
think
, all individuals admire the feeling of being wanted even if it’s a lie. The digital world has created the sense that it is passable to be who anyone wishes to be online. However, I believe that the way people know each other online and the type of relationships they
make
virtually
have
changed
and for the worse.

Instead
of being a true friend to the people around each other, most are being turned inward, forgetting the true definition of a friend. Human beings have
feelings and
they feel broken at times and do not always smile
but
the Internet
only
shows
one's happy moments keeping one from
fully
being known. The types of friendships people
make
these days are quick and short-lasting. In real life friendship, people
see
each other at one’s best and worst time and remain there for one another. This can never
be compared
to a social network friendship. One can
only
get
to know someone by spending time together for the reason that the Internet cannot replace shared experience and personal communication. However, due to the Internet, people can
make
friends anywhere from the world which was quite impossible in the past era. Finding school and college friends and getting in touch with them is an advantage that the Internet offers to us. However, true friendship is not possible if two people do not spend time together, share their common interests, talks a lot and
help
each other both in
good
and
bad
times.

Rightfully
, life
is meant
to be
lived
and have
many
physical experiences, bonding with another person’s physical presence.
Instead
of being a true friend to the people around each other, they are spending time online to
make
friends. This is, in my opinion, is a
negative
aspect of the digital era.

In conclusion
, making friends beyond boundaries and getting in touch with childhood friends could be the advantages of the digital era
but
the way we are becoming dependent on the technology and the way we are pretending to maintain our friendship online have
negative
consequences on our personal, moral and social aspects.
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