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many countries spend private or public money for space exploration. is it good why to spend more money? discuss

Space exploration is being an attractive for everyone. Some countries spent their money on it, either individual money and country's money. However, spent money on that way still argue in society
On the one hand, there are some reasons for people who argue that is better. First, it would be the biggest investment for the country due to long term benefits. It is believed that space exploration would bring many advantages, as consequent many countries willing to allocate their expenditure for space exploration development. Second, many people curious about thei situation on space, therefore they want to experience to explore in the space.
On the other hand, others believe that it is better to save money or spent it in other ways because there are a lot of things in the country that would better to improve. For example, the government spent more to improve education system such as provide access to countryside or construce more confinient school which proper tools or equipment. It is believed that it would bring more advantages in the future. In addition, people should think twice or more before spend their money to thersier needs because who knows what would happend in the future. For instance, people suddently get big disaster in their family or country that need much money.
To sum up, while many people believes space exploration gurantee big benefits for country who put invest on that, however they should consider the worse problem that they might face in the future. I believe that it would better to allocate or save some money for an urgent sutuation before spent it in thersier need.
Space exploration is being an attractive for everyone.
Some
countries spent their money on it, either individual money and country's money.
However
, spent money on that way
still
argue in society

On the one hand, there are
some
reasons for people who argue
that is
better.
First
, it would be the biggest investment for the country due to long term benefits. It
is believed
that space exploration would bring
many
advantages, as consequent
many
countries willing to allocate their expenditure for space exploration development. Second,
many
people curious about
thei
situation on space,
therefore
they want to experience to explore in the space.

On the other hand, others believe that it is better to save money or spent it in other ways
because
there are
a lot of
things in the country that would better to
improve
.
For example
, the
government
spent more to
improve
education system such as provide access to countryside or
construce
more
confinient
school which proper tools or equipment. It
is believed
that it would bring more advantages in the future.
In addition
, people should
think
twice or more
before
spend their money to
thersier
needs
because
who knows what would
happend
in the future.
For instance
, people
suddently
get
big
disaster in their family or country that need much money.

To sum up, while
many
people
believes
space exploration
gurantee
big
benefits for country who put invest on that,
however
they should consider the worse problem that they might face in the future. I believe that it would better to allocate or save
some
money for an urgent
sutuation
before
spent it in
thersier
need.

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