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I WANT TO BECOME AN ELECTRICAL ENGINEER

I WANT TO BECOME AN ELECTRICAL ENGINEER PGp
I will not dream about success I’ll always work for it. As the only child in the family I knew that I have a massive responsibility on my shoulders. My parents knew the value of education and they sent me to one of the prestigious colleges in the country. From a youthful age my heart was in the Science and Technology field. Constantly back in my primary schooling age I have reminded my mother “mother, I want be aDoctor someday”. Whenever I found a chance to explore electrical equipments like toy cars I didn’t hesitate. However as I became more matured and started to grasp the concepts of mathematics hence my ambition of becoming a Doctor took a turn towards engineering. As I mentioned earlier from a youthful age itself I had my eye towards electrical engineering. Furthermore there are crucial reasons. firstly, from the various web searches I came to know that it is fairly easy to find the first job due to the fact that most employers in the electrical field are searching for new blood, with fresh knowledge and at the same time they get young people who they can mold to their own specific needs and make experts out of them. Another reason was that majors like electrical engineering are universal and the knowledge you gained will not be limited to just one country. These are some of the major reasons for me to choose electrical engineering. Apart from those main reasons I could mention the adrenaline that I will face with, the computer knowledge that I will gain, and the interest that will always keep you on track since the subject can never be boring and for the fact that you will be always at the edge. Moreover, I researched this field because I have a high interest in math and science, and I am always interested in how things work and function. I like how engineering is an exact concept. I like precision and accuracy, and how the jobs are hands on and are never repetitive. The pay is good and livable, and you do not have to spend an eternity going to school. This field does require constant thinking, so headaches may occur often. Much math and science needs to Before that, I need to discipline myself with this new lifestyle as this is how a professional engineer should become, because sometimes I am bombarded with so many distractions that will disrupt my mood and concentration. Sometimes when I was indulged in a distraction, it will drag up to 1 hour period (unfortunately it is normally caused by watching drama). Most importantly is how you change those distractions into actions. I need to restrain myself from all unnecessary matters by considering which activities will benefit me more; giving some rates to those actions before doing it is the best selection for now. Besides that I need to constantly learn new things as technology is always changing. Just look at the gap between the release of the two phones by the world’s third-largest mobile phone maker after Samsung and Nokia; Apple – it is not even a year after the release of iPhone 4s, they have already released iPhone 5. Maybe because of the rapid civilisation, proponents of technological determinisms make a strong case for letting self-accelerating technologies to follow their own life cycle. So as an engineer-to-be, I need to keep myself up-to-date with the current technologies – since an engineer needs to have accuracy and vigour. Hopefully, by watching documentaries or educational channels in the television, for instance Mythbuster and Top Gear, they deepen my understandings on how the situation is on the current world. Every human being has their own career aspirations and mine is to be a Electrical engineer, a dream that I held ever since I was in school due to my deep interest in technical fields such as electrical and electronics. Although, electrical engineer is a difficult career to achieve because it have many obstacles and challenges to be met, but I am sure that I am able to make full preparations for the realization of my dreams. Choosing the right career can mean the difference between being satisfied and being disappointed with my life. Many factors can influence the career that I may have for the rest of my life. A decision that I am going to make at the young age of nineteen will have a major impact on the next ten years if not the rest of my life. In order to make the best decision possible for my future I have decided, if not forced, to research a career of interest to me. The two major career choices I have been interested in for the past few years have been engineering and teaching. I have already done researched teaching so I decided to research engineering. There are many different types of engineering so I decided to pick the one most interesting to me. Electrical engineering is the career field I have selected to investigate. Engineering is something my parents have urged me to consider. Since a young kid I have been interested in building things. I use to tell my parents I wanted to be an inventor and build a time machine. Legos were my favorite toy growing up, and I have always been exceptionally good in math. Since my freshmen year in high school I have been interested in becoming a teacher, but during my freshmen year in college I was becoming more and more aware of the amount of money lower level teachers made. Many people were recommending engineering as a possible career option so I decided to look into it. Since I have always found electricity to be cool I decided to learn more about electrical engineering as a future career field.
I will not dream about success I’ll always work for it.
As
the
only
child in the family I knew that I have a massive responsibility on my shoulders. My parents knew the value of
education and
they
sent
me to one of the prestigious colleges in the country. From a youthful
age
my heart was in the Science and
Technology
field
.
Constantly
back in my primary schooling
age
I have reminded my mother “mother, I
want be
aDoctor
someday”.
Whenever
I found a chance to explore
electrical
equipments like toy cars I didn’t hesitate.
However
as I became more matured and
started
to grasp the concepts of mathematics
hence
my ambition of becoming a Doctor took a turn towards engineering.
As
I mentioned earlier from a youthful
age
itself I had my eye towards
electrical
engineering
.
Furthermore
there are crucial
reasons
.
firstly
, from the various web searches I came to know that it is
fairly
easy to find the
first
job due to the fact that most employers in the
electrical
field
are searching for new blood, with fresh knowledge and at the same time they
get
young
people
who they can mold to their
own
specific
needs
and
make
experts out of them. Another
reason
was that
majors
like
electrical
engineering
are universal and the knowledge you gained will not
be limited
to
just
one country. These are
some of the
major
reasons
for me to choose
electrical
engineering
. Apart from those main
reasons
I could mention the adrenaline that I will face with, the computer knowledge that I will gain, and the
interest
that will always
keep
you on
track
since the subject can never be boring and for the fact that you will be always at the edge.
Moreover
, I researched this
field
because
I have a high
interest
in math and science, and I am always
interested
in how things work and function. I like how
engineering
is an exact concept. I like precision and accuracy, and how the jobs are hands on and are never repetitive. The pay is
good
and livable, and you do not
have to
spend an eternity going to school. This
field
does require constant thinking,
so
headaches may occur
often
. Much math and science
needs
to
Before
that, I
need
to discipline myself with this new lifestyle as this is how a professional
engineer
should become,
because
sometimes
I
am bombarded
with
so
many
distractions that will disrupt my mood and concentration.
Sometimes
when I
was indulged
in a distraction, it will drag up to
1 hour
period (unfortunately it is
normally
caused by watching drama). Most
importantly
is how you
change
those distractions into actions. I
need
to restrain myself from all unnecessary matters by considering which activities will benefit me more; giving
some
rates to those actions
before
doing it is the best selection for
now
.
Besides
that I
need
to
constantly
learn new things as
technology
is always changing.
Just
look at the gap between the release of the two phones by the world’s third-largest mobile phone maker after Samsung and Nokia; Apple
it is not even a
year
after the release of iPhone 4s, they have already released iPhone 5. Maybe
because
of the rapid
civilisation
, proponents of technological
determinisms
make
a strong case for letting self-accelerating
technologies
to follow their
own
life
cycle.
So
as an engineer-to-be, I
need
to
keep
myself up-to-date with the
current
technologies
since an
engineer
needs
to have accuracy and
vigour
.
Hopefully
, by watching documentaries or educational channels
in the television
,
for instance
Mythbuster
and Top Gear, they deepen my understandings on how the situation is on the
current
world. Every human being has their
own
career
aspirations and mine is to be
a
Electrical
engineer
, a dream that I held ever since I was in school due to my deep
interest
in technical
fields
such as
electrical
and electronics. Although,
electrical
engineer
is a difficult
career
to achieve
because
it
have
many
obstacles and challenges to
be met
,
but
I am sure that I am able to
make
full preparations for the realization of my dreams. Choosing the right
career
can mean the difference between
being satisfied
and
being disappointed
with my
life
.
Many
factors can influence the
career
that I may have for the rest of my
life
. A decision that I am going to
make
at the young
age
of nineteen will have a
major
impact on the
next
ten years if not the rest of my
life
. In order to
make
the best decision possible for my future I have
decided
, if not forced, to research a
career
of
interest
to me. The two
major
career
choices I have been
interested
in for the past few years have been
engineering
and teaching. I have already done researched teaching
so
I
decided
to research
engineering
. There are
many
different
types of
engineering
so
I
decided
to pick the one most interesting to me.
Electrical
engineering
is the
career
field
I have selected to investigate. Engineering is something my parents have urged me to consider.
Since
a young kid I have been
interested
in building things. I
use to
tell
my parents I wanted to be an inventor and build a time machine. Legos were my favorite toy growing up, and I have always been
exceptionally
good
in math. Since my freshmen
year
in high school I have been
interested
in becoming a teacher,
but
during my freshmen
year
in college I was becoming more and more aware of the amount of money lower level teachers made.
Many
people
were recommending
engineering
as a possible
career
option
so
I
decided
to look into it. Since I have always found electricity to be cool I
decided
to learn more about
electrical
engineering
as a future
career
field
.
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