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DANGEROUS SPORTS FOR YOUNG GENERATİON

Nowadays, many exciting and dangerous sports are becoming more popular day by day in the world. Mostly, attracting the young generation but they try these sports without complete knowledge and guidelines. There are many kinds of dangerous sports for different interests such as scuba-diving or bungee-jumping. On the other hand, sports that include violence are increasingly becoming a craze with the younger population like boxing or wrestling. I believe there are two causes of this; social media, the passion of adrenalin.
The first reason of that people spend a lot of time on social media and most people can be easily influenced by others. They want to try and share posts to gain more likes and followers without even thinking about the consequences. It also adds a ‘coolness’ factor to their personality when they tell people about their stunts. If a young person truly enjoys doing these sports and know that the security measure should be taken, there is not a problem. However, the number of young people who want to do these sports because of making a great display to others is increasing in these years and they generally are not enough knowledge. This is a complication due to fact that there are numerous places where do not care about the safety of people and they risk people’s lives.
The second reason of that, the young generation is adventurous and courageous to do anything that adds vitality to their lives. Extreme sports are an experience that humans can't do in daily life such as flying, fighting. In addition, adventurous sports need a lot of concentration. Consequently, they cannot think of any other issues while participating in them and get relieved of all the little worries in their head. Therefore, they actively participate in risky sports, so as to get that adrenaline rush of excitement and enjoyment.
In conclusion, sports should always be a part of people's lives to be healthy or to get away from stress but risking life for sports isn't bravery from any perspective. They need to be conscious and think thoroughly about the effects of dangerous sports on their lives.
Nowadays,
many
exciting and
dangerous
sports are becoming more popular day by day in the world.
Mostly
, attracting the young generation 
but
they try these sports without complete knowledge and guidelines. There are
many
kinds of
dangerous
 sports for
different
interests such as scuba-diving or bungee-jumping. On the other hand, sports that include violence are
increasingly
becoming a craze with the younger population like boxing or wrestling. I believe there are two causes of this; social media, the passion of adrenalin.

The
first
reason of that people spend
a lot of
time on social media and most people can be
easily
influenced by others. They want to
try and
share posts to gain more likes and followers without even thinking about the consequences. It
also
adds
a ‘coolness’ factor to their personality when they
tell
people about their stunts. If a young person
truly
enjoys doing these sports and know that the security measure should
be taken
, there is not a problem.
However
, the number of young people who want to do these sports
because
of making a great display to others is increasing in these
years and
they
generally
are not
enough
knowledge. This is a complication due to fact that there are numerous places where do not care about the safety of
people and
they
risk
people’s
lives
.

The second reason of that, the young generation is adventurous and courageous to do anything that
adds
vitality to their lives. Extreme sports are an experience that humans can't do in daily life such as flying, fighting.
In addition
, adventurous sports need
a lot of
concentration.
Consequently
, they cannot
think
of any other issues while participating in them and
get
relieved of all the
little
worries in their head.
Therefore
, they
actively
participate in risky sports,
so as to
get
that adrenaline rush of excitement and enjoyment.

In conclusion
, sports should always be a part of
people
's lives to be healthy or to
get
away from
stress
but
risking life for sports isn't bravery from any perspective. They need to be conscious and
think
thoroughly
 about the effects of
dangerous
sports on their lives.

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