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3. Many young adults say that without their parents, they never would have had the opportunity to play sports as a child or adolescent. Explain the ways that your parents encouraged/facilitated or discouraged/interfered with your sport participation. Were there differences between the support provided by your mother and support provided by your father? • Your concluding paragraph should describe what you anticipate in the future with respect to sports in your life, and how that future relates to your past experiences and what may be occurring in your life in the future.

3. Many young adults say that without their parents, they never would have had the opportunity to play sports as a child or adolescent. Explain the ways that your parents encouraged/facilitated or discouraged/interfered with your sport participation. Were there differences between the support provided by your mother and support provided by your father? • Your concluding paragraph should describe what you anticipate in the future with respect to sports in your life, and how that future relates to your past experiences and what may be occurring in your life in the future. O6G
Parents play an important role in each children life. The upbringing of a child to the important decision taken at our adolescent parents play a vital role. So, does my parents played a vital part in my sports career. As this era is of new and latest technologies where I started spending time more on tv’s, mobiles and computers rather than enjoying the outdoor life and freshness of the environment. As the technology increased, we all became slaves of it wasting maximum amount of time on tablets and somewhere, somehow, we lost the gossips we used to had staying in a family. As time passed, I started facing eyesight problems which occurred due to watching of more electronic screens. Looking at all these situations my parents decided to make some changes in the lifestyles realizing that this is not only my issue but an important step to be taken for the whole family. My parents started paying more attention to my sports career and encouraged me for more outdoor games and sports activities. To keep up my interest we started having outdoor picnics and some games like volleyball, tracking, cycling. This made my interest in playing outdoor games and hence started my sports career of volleyball. I started participating in school competitions and at state levels. During my schooling I was very shy and having zero self confidence which always keeps me away from the games. When I was in my 9th grade our school organized the sports day in which various outdoor sports were going to play but I refused to participate in any game. Later on my parents encouraged me that I have to take part in the competition and they taught me one thing that time that either you are wining or losing the game that thing doesn’t but the thing which matter was this you are participating in the game. You have the ability to compete with another player. Then I take part for the first time in the sports competition. even my father took me outside every day to increase my stamina and helps me in the practice of the game. Moreover, best part of that competition is that I participate in the 4 games and win each game. Thar part of my life was best part which make me stronger and more confident person. Side by I had back of my parents which developed self esteem, confidence and they motivate to the best they could. My father always actively participated in his free times playing with me and providing the comfort by gifting me best sports shoes. We used to have early morning jogging and stretching so that I could be active for my sports career and on the other hand my mother took care of my health and diet ensuring always if I am fine and giving the emotional support I need. Moving further, if any thing has a positive effect there will be a negative as well. Having a sports career was not so easy. Sometimes my parents would over-involve themselves creating a stress on me which emphasized the importance of success and winning. This pressure starts taking away the enjoyment and pleasure of playing and often affected my performance. To conclusion, I would like to continue my volleyball career which has been somewhere lost due to focusing on higher studies as could not spare much time for it. Starting again will be a tough task but keeping in mind all the benefits and how it started will encourage me to bring that happy moments again with my family.
Parents
play an
important
role in each children life. The upbringing of a child to the
important
decision taken at our adolescent
parents
play a vital role.
So
, does my
parents
played a vital
part
in my
sports
career. As this era is of new and latest technologies where I
started
spending
time
more on
tv
’s, mobiles and computers
rather
than enjoying the
outdoor
life and freshness of the environment. As the technology increased, we all became slaves of it wasting maximum amount of
time
on tablets and somewhere, somehow, we lost the gossips we
used
to had staying in a family.
As
time
passed, I
started
facing eyesight problems which occurred due to watching of more electronic screens. Looking at all these situations my
parents
decided to
make
some
changes
in the lifestyles realizing that this is not
only
my issue
but
an
important
step to
be taken
for the whole family. My
parents
started
paying more attention to my
sports
career
and encouraged me for more
outdoor
games
and
sports
activities. To
keep
up my interest we
started
having
outdoor
picnics and
some
games
like volleyball, tracking, cycling. This made my interest in playing
outdoor
games
and
hence
started
my
sports
career
of volleyball. I
started
participating in school
competitions
and at state levels. During my schooling I was
very
shy and having zero
self confidence
which always
keeps
me away from the
games
. When I was in my 9th grade our school organized the
sports
day in which various
outdoor
sports
were going to play
but
I refused to participate in any game. Later on my
parents
encouraged me that I
have to
take
part
in the
competition and
they taught me one thing that
time
that either you are wining or losing the game that thing doesn’t
but
the thing which matter was this you are participating in the game. You have the ability to compete with another player. Then I take
part
for the
first
time
in the
sports
competition
.
even
my father took me outside every day to increase my stamina and
helps
me in the practice of the game.
Moreover
,
best
part
of that
competition
is that I participate in the 4
games
and win each game. Thar
part
of my life was
best
part
which
make
me stronger and more confident person. Side by I had back of my
parents
which developed
self esteem
,
confidence and
they motivate to the
best
they could. My father always
actively
participated in his free
times
playing with me and providing the comfort by gifting me
best
sports
shoes. We
used
to have early morning jogging and stretching
so
that I could be active for my
sports
career
and
on the other hand
my mother took care of my health and diet ensuring always if I am fine and giving the emotional support I need. Moving
further
, if
any thing
has a
positive
effect there will be a
negative
as well
. Having a
sports
career
was not
so
easy.
Sometimes
my
parents
would over-involve themselves creating a
stress
on me which emphasized the importance of success and winning. This pressure
starts
taking away the enjoyment and pleasure of playing and
often
affected
my performance. To conclusion, I would like to continue my volleyball
career
which has been somewhere lost due to focusing on higher studies as could not spare much
time
for it. Starting again will be a tough task
but
keeping in mind all the benefits and how it
started
will encourage me to bring that happy moments again with my family.
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IELTS essay 3. Many young adults say that without their parents, they never would have had the opportunity to play sports as a child or adolescent. Explain the ways that your parents encouraged/facilitated or discouraged/interfered with your sport participation. Were there differences between the support provided by your mother and support provided by your father? • Your concluding paragraph should describe what you anticipate in the future with respect to sports in your life, and how that future relates to your past experiences and what may be occurring in your life in the future.

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